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divendres, 11 de maig del 2012

I lived a real video game


A month ago, I lived a real video game. It seems impossible, but this story is real. One day, I was playing my favourite video game: Singstar. I love to sing and that day I was singing a lot of songs! But on the fifth song a new option appeared on the screen: a small square with the words RL in it. I was surprised and I touched it with the arrow. My room disappeared, all my things disappeared too, my bed, my lamp, my desk, my computer… and me! When I opened my eyes, I was on a TV show a stage, in front of the crowd! I guessed I was in the video game. So, the words RL meant Real Life! I looked around: I saw the judge of the contest, who was in front of me and he was looking me with his beautiful blue eyes, waiting for my performance. I began to sing very well because I was living my dream! The crowd applauded me, and the handsome judge said that he loved my voice. I won the contest, it was fantastic! But the next day, when I told my experience to my friends, they didn’t believe me. I didn’t mind anyway, because I really had a good time!

   Sara Martin, 2n ESO

dimarts, 8 de maig del 2012

The key of the fate


The key of the fate
I sneaked into the old abandoned house at the end of the street. I was surprised to find a small, padlocked treasure chest on a dresser in an upstairs bedroom. There was a note that said, “Do not open. EVER!” I also noticed a small key hanging on the wall. I tried the key in the padlock. It was a perfect fit.
The key was the correct one, I could open the chest. But I wondered if I should. There was that note which said “Do not open ever”. Impossible, that note just made me want to open it. Nothing tempts so much as a note which says that you mustn’t do it.
So I turned the key. I heard a very low click, and then I opened the chest.
I felt a little disappointed at what I saw inside. Just a photo and some papers well folded. I took the photo and I looked at it. There was a woman and a man leaning against a big tree in a park. Both were between 30 and 35 years old. He was the tallest. He had dark hair; long enough to be placed behind his ears. He had a lovely, smiling face, with a beard of two days. He was wearing blue jeans and a black coat. She had long, dark, curly hair. Her eyes were almost black, and her skin was darker than his. She was wearing jeans too, dark shoes and a long coat. And she seemed to be very happy. With her great smile she looked very beautiful. But I didn’t notice anything of that. I was just staring at her face; it reminded me of my own face. Although I was younger than her. I was 20.
I turned the picture and I noticed that there were some words:
My dear Sally Heaton
 JW
Now I was scared. Sally Heaton. That was my name. All that seemed a little odd. That woman who had a face so similar to mine had the same name too. Very weird.
I turned the picture. I stared at her face again. Now that I was paying attention to our likeness I thought that Sally was too similar to me to be another Sally. She was me. Too weird, I didn’t like it.
I left the photo back in the chest. Then I took the papers. It seemed to be a long handwritten letter.
After that picture of an older “myself” I wasn’t sure I wanted to know what the letter said. But I knew that I would regret it if I didn’t read it. So I began:
Dear Sally Heaton. Well, I don’t know if I should call dear to myself. It doesn’t matter.  I know you must be a little confused because of that picture of an older you, but don’t worry, don’t try to understand why this is happening, you just have to know that I’m Sally Heaton too. Just keep reading. I’m writing to you, or to me, because I want you to avoid the great mistake of my life.
 As you can see in the last picture James Williams gave me I was very happy, both were, indeed. We were together since university. I really loved him, but he is already dead, and it’s my fault, I caused his death. That’s why I feel so guilty. And before I bury myself in my own misery I have to warn you about what you MUST NOT do.
Two months ago I met a man called Jacob Monaghan. At least he told me that was his name. I won’t explain to you the whole story because it is too long and you wouldn’t understand it. You must only know I was deceived by that Monaghan. I tried to fix it, as he had advised me not to do. So he sent someone to my flat. I wasn’t there that night, only James. I arrived the next day to find a note on James’ body which said “You knew what could happen. JM”.
That’s all, Sally. Never accept anything from Jacob Monaghan. Just run away from him.
PS: Maybe you are wondering how I knew you would be the only person who would open the chest. It is simple, I was in the old house of my grandmother too when I was 20. I also found the chest and the key hanging on the wall. But the note just said “Do not open”. And there was nothing inside. I filled it for you. And I add “EVER”, too. I simply wanted to make the chest more attractive. I know the way you think, Sally!
Finally, I don’t want you to think that all is inevitable, it’s not too late for you.
 I guess your life has been exactly the same as mine until now, but it won’t be any more, because I never received this warning from myself. From now on you will have another life, who knows how different things will be with this letter. Maybe the warning isn’t just necessary because you won’t meet James, or maybe you won’t fall in love, or maybe he won’t, or maybe you won’t make my mistake. But I had to leave this to you, because if I didn’t, your life would be as mine, you would be me. With this letter you will become another person: I’m giving you a new chance to make things right.
Good luck, Sally.
SH
No words. I had no words. It was too incredible for me. I just couldn’t believe the letter in my hands had been written by an older me, it made no sense. I looked at the picture again. There was no doubt, that woman was me.
I didn’t know what to think. If it was simply a joke, then nothing was important. But what if there was something real. I was confused and scared, too much to even notice some odd things. For example, how on earth was anyone able to send messages to herself in the past? But had she really sent a message to the past? Then, if it was real, was it important how she had sent the content of the chest to me? I didn’t think so.
I had too many things in my mind at that moment. I just wanted to return home. I hesitated for a second whether I should leave there the chest or bring it home. I just knew I didn’t want anybody to see it. Finally I decided the best would be to leave the chest where it was: nobody would enter that house. But the key would be safer with me.
I left the house, trying to remember if I knew someone called James Williams or Jacob Monaghan. I was already in the street when I began to think that maybe nothing had been real. It had to be my imagination. Maybe I should go back to the house and open again the chest. I felt fear. I didn’t want to know if there really was a letter from myself. Maybe another time, but not today. I still had the key, anyway.
So I began to move away while I put the chain with the key around my neck.
Maria Fuentes

dilluns, 7 de maig del 2012

My dream


I want a world withous vidence or shame.
I want a school por everybody.
I want lood for every person in the world.
I want equal vighnts.
I want a world without wars.
I want free hospitals and schools.
I want a toy por every children in  this worlel.
I want this drean.
I want this world.
                       
                       
                              by: Ainhoa Albadalejo , Alba Bras,  Alberto Bascuñaña

The unforgottable experience


THE UNFORGOTTABLE EXPERIENCE

A month ago, I lived a real videogame. It was so strange, and I just can remember that I was playing Mario Bros. game and, suddenly, I was into it, and I don’t know how.
The first minutes, I was surprised and a little bit scared because I didn’t know where I was. Later, I understood I was into the game, and I couldn’t believe it. It was amazing! But I didn’t have enough time to think about it because a little mushroom was killing me. I had to run away very quickly and disappear from his sight. After that, I was waling alone in a beautiful garden. There I thought I had to win this game and then maybe, I could leave it. So I started to look for some enemies, to kill them. It wasn’t easy, but I could find a lot of strange creatures like evil tortoises, rabbits and birds, and I defeated them. I felt like a hero!
Everything was perfect when suddenly, Bowser appeared in front of me. Bowser is the evilest monster of the game. It’s a huge and it kills you very quickly. I was afraid of it! But I had to fight against it. It was very difficult and I was fighting for a long time but, finally, I defeated it! It was the first time I got it, and I was proud of myself. Then, I started to feel a strange sensation, I closed the eyes and when I opened them, I was at home again!

Natàlia Rubio (2n d'ESO)

The Strange Machine

My uncle is an inventor. One day, I was searching through the attic of my uncle's house. I found a very strange machine with many buttons, knobs, dials, and levers. I had never seen a mchine like it before. On one side, there was a button that said 'on'.
I've always been curious so I pressed it. Suddenly, the machine started to shake and to make a very hard noise. I closed my eyes for a second and when I opened then again, the noise had stopped and instead of the machine. There was a sort of robot in front of me. It had two arms and two legs but just one eye. I was completely astorished but i started to talk to that thing.
- Do you understand me? Can you hear me?
- Of course I can!- he answered- My name is Robin andq I was made by your Uncle Jack, wen though he has used me just once. He created me when his mum died because he needed help to do the housework. I helped him a lot but he has never used me again.
I wa just 12 and I felt sorry for Robin, becouse I could undersatand him and I new he felt. He felt alone and bores and I'm he needed a friend.
-Hey, listen! Do you know what we can do? You'll  come home with me and I will talk to you want to.
Rubin liked the idea, he was so excited! We walked home and since that day. Robin has been my best friend: the one I can trust, laugh with and, above all, I know he will be there for me I need him.
                                                                                         
Clara Trullenque Ortiz      
                             4rt d'ESO       

The Evil Scientist


I followed the evil scientist into a dark room. What I saw, I would never forget..

Inside the room there were a group of people, but they were making strange sound. After few minutes of silence, i realised that they weren't acting normally and then, the scientist said '' I've Pinally succeed. After ten years of non-stop research, I've finally invented the undecid's virus! They are the firsts zombies!'' I was terrified: ''And why did you invent this kind of virus? They will throw all the mankind into chaos! Why did you want to create zombies so badly?''
-That's because I'm an insane mad scientist! I only deserve to bring chaos and destruction to this world and then, I will invade and rule the world! Fuahahahahaha! When he said this, the left the room after saying that they would attack me and I would become another zombie. I resalised that the room I was in was actually the lab, so there were a lot of dishes that could be usefull. I was abottle that was familiar. That was acid. I took the bottle and I threw the acid tutthe zombies, but it wasn't effective because they didn't feel any pair, so I decided to try to burn then. It didn't stop them, so I continued searching for things. I  saw an object  which had an strang shape. It said somethings like FG 204. Behind this, there was a window so I brorce it with the FG 204 and I went out. After running away, i fainted.

Aida Padilla (1r de Batxillerat)

The Strange Machine


My Uncle is an inventor. One day, I was searching throu the attic of my Uncle`s house. I found a very sbrange machine wibh many
buttons, knobs,dials, and levers. I had never seen a machine like it before. On one side, there was a button that said 'on'.

I pressed the botton. sodolenly somethng very strong happened. There was also voof on the tep and it opened. Iwent inside. There was a screen too and on it was wntten ''type a year''.I typed the number 1413. Suddenly the voot closed and the maebhne started to shaker. I vonishe ! then I saw buildings, kingdons and kings.
I realized this was a time muchne. I saw Alexandre flemming and many other scientists. Then I entered the year 2050. I saw flying cars  and realized that humans have evolved. There were many tall tewers. There weren about 500 floors. There were also no poor peopel! then T typed the year 30.000. It was suddenly verg hot. Then I realized that it was global waming and there was no water. I had no energy and lay down. By mstake I pressed another button and suddenly, i was back were i started! Attey a while I realized the time travel had just been a illusion

                                                                           Erik Martin 4t ESO 

dissabte, 5 de maig del 2012

The evil scientist


The door was middle opened, so I could see him walking back and forth, like he was thinking about something important and maybe looking for something really special. I was quite scared, because I didn't want to be discovered. I didn't know what to do, so I just stood there quietly, holding my breath.
The room seemed really huge and it was full test tubes, glasses, computers and other strange apparatus. At first sight, it appeared, but I knew the evil scientist had mad ideas. I was sure he was planning a bad experiment. His strange behaving during the whole month proved it: he had been too busy and he didn't want to talk to anybody. When people asked him about his research, he only laughed. It was a rare laugh, sad and bitten at the same time.
Suddenly, the sound of his steps returned me to the reality. He must have found what he was looking for. Unfortunately, it was too dark so I couldn't see what it was. Then, after a few seconds he ran towards the back door and he just left the room. I immediately entered the room and I started my investigation. What I discovered I would never had imagined. I couldn't believe it. I was wrong and I felt embarrassed.
His projects showed that he was looking for a way to cure his wife's illness. She had been sick of leukemia for several years and she was getting worse and worse. For this reason, he was trying to obtain stem cells for a transplant.

Clara Izquierdo (1r de Batxillerat)

dijous, 3 de maig del 2012

Describing a fictional character: Sheldon Cooper



Sheldon Lee Cooper is one of the main character in the American TV Show, “The Big Band Theory”. He's played by Jim Parsons. The series follows the lives of Leonard and Sheldon, two physicists that share an apartment; and their best friends Howard and Rajesh, an aerospace engineer and an astrophysicist; and their new neigh or Penny, a worked in the Cheesecke Factory and a waitress, that wants to be an actress (She is the most normal of them).

Sheldon Cooper is tall, fair-skinned and thin. He's got short and brown hair. He wears a long-sleeved t-shirt under a short-sleeved one, with a superhero, or a scientific research . His personality is so complicated. He's very smart (187 Intelligent Quotient) so the thinks he's superrior and underestimates the people around him. He has strict routines, he has difficulties is social relation, and he doesn't understand sarcasm and irony because he understands the literal meanings. He isn't attracted about women or men. He can't lie and he has a photographic memory also.

He love being tidy, playing videogames, seeing science-fiction films and series (His favourite is Spock, from Stat Trek), playing board card games, trains, and Thai food

Jan Ródenas (3r ESO)

divendres, 27 d’abril del 2012

´SON GOKU´ BY ANDREU PUNSOLA


Son Goku is the main character in the Japanese Tv shows     ' Dragon Ball', Dragon Ball Z' and 'Dragon Ball GT'. The series follow the adventures of Goku and his friends Bulma , Krilin, Yamcha and the Mutenroshi Master, and, years after, also Trunks, Vegeta, Gohan, Goten, Videl and Bra, with Whom he saves the wolds from the plans of evil. Goku was born in the planet Vegeta and he was adopted here by a man named Son Gohan. Although he's not human, he's a saiyajin, his adoptive grandpa Son Gohan grows him in the wold of figth, aptitude that Goku uses whan he meet Bulma and he decides the help her out in that Goku uses when he meets Bulma and he decides the help ger out in the search of the seven dragon balls that when tohether make appear a dragon who is bound to do the bidding of the person who reunited the balls. Then, Goku discovers how big the wold is by travelling with Bulma.
Goku is tall man, broad-shouldered and dark-hareid. His hair never grows because he's a saiyajin. He has also got a brown-furred tail in his back. Goku always wears the Mutenroshi Master's uniform fot the Budokai Tenkaichi, whitch is orange and blue.
Son Goku is an interesting character because he has taught me to never give up nor put my hands down, no matter how difficult things are, that teamwork is really important, and that you must always show respect to the ones who love you. Vegeta also taught me that there's a moment when you have to leave the pride behind, and Krilin showed me the importance of a good friend.
Andreu Punsola, 3r ESO